“There is a big difference between assigning complex texts and teaching complex texts…” —Doug, Fisher, Nancy Frey, and Diane Lapp Your Work MattersIn February, I discussed ideas about being intentional with the questions we ask when analyzing our data. In that newsletter, I shared my dismay at the plan to “find more passages.” And what is our instructional response? We find more passages that have the standards-aligned questions students “need to practice” or we start doing an article a day so that they get more practice with informational text. Here’s the thing - simply having a student practice reading passages using your mnemonic device and answering questions will continue getting you the same results. Because you’re not TEACHING them anything new with regards to comprehension instruction. (Newsflash - reading directions is not instruction!) I’ve already written about this, so why am I bringing it up again? Because we are creatures of habit. And as a former literacy coach, I know exactly how conversations during grade level planning are going after the latest round of assessments meant to predict state testing results. Do your conversations sound like this?
There are some positive practices in this example - we are analyzing students’ performance and thinking about how to respond instructionally to address their gaps. But picture this. You have a hard time understanding what you read. So for support, your teacher hands you another passage to read and tells you to write RUNNERS down the page, to find the main idea, and use context clues for unknown words. Have you learned anything that will help develop your understanding of the text? Maybe, maybe not. Has the author provided context clues in the text that support the reader with challenging words? How clearly are the ideas on the text connected to support the reader’s understanding? Will RUNNERS help the reader with analyzing the text structure? Passages aren’t instruction. Simply practicing with more informational text passages may not address the reason students struggled with that standard. As Sue Pimentel and David Liben explain, “Reporting test results by standards, strategies, genre or any single construct confuses cause and effect. Answering a question based on a standard is an effect of comprehension, not a cause. And a student’s response to any one question tied to a standard does not predict how well that student will do on a similar question using a different text.” (74 million, 2025) If the tests haven’t changed (they haven’t) we can adjust our analysis and instructional response. Simply giving students more passages isn’t instruction, what we do with them is. And we can do more than vaguely tell students to use context clues or think about the main idea. Let’s put what Pimentel and Liben said to the test. I live in North Carolina and have a child in 4th grade so I’m using a passage from the Grade 4 Reading North Carolina End-of-Grade Released Assessment as an example; let’s look at Dinos in the Dark by Stephen Whitt. In the released answer key, we have access to the Depth of Knowledge and the aligned standard for each question. A typical data table for this passage might look like the one below: When analyzing this data, we immediately see that this passage was challenging for our class. There is only one question that the class got right, and zero students got a 100%. We notice that students need help with informational text standards, although maybe less so RI.4.3? RI.4.1 is a mystery - the understanding of that standard is split 50/50. But clearly, we need to teach RI.4.5. And this is typically where the conversation ends - we recognize which standards need to be addressed, begin searching for an informational text/passage to use, and away we go. Have we determined why students struggled with this passage? It is possible that the questions were challenging, but that cannot be the answer for all students. Because (again) the ability to answer comprehension questions is the effect, not the cause. We need to dig deeper. First, we go back and read the text, considering the guiding questions of The Reading Comprehension Blueprint as we read.
A question to consider then is how well do students understand these concepts (listed above) in the text? Use the answers to that question to guide instructional moves; might students benefit from some lessons about text structure and how to make sense of text when the author connects sentences paragraphs away from each other? When we next consider the language in the standards, we must do so with the text demands in mind while also paying attention to the fact the standards say what students should DO as a result of their text comprehension. The standards are written assuming students comprehend the text and can therefore think critically about it. (If it is easier, pretend each of these standards begins with, “assuming the student understands the text…”
Let's take a look at one page of questions for this text and consider how the text demands impact students' success rate at answering them. To answer question 33, a student must comprehend paragraph 2 and the connection between the first two sentences in it. The text structure in paragraphs 1-2 is compare/contrast/description, which explains the surprise; it compares our typical picture of dinosaur climate to what paleontologists have discovered - that dinosaurs lived in both warm and cold climates. To answer question 34, a student must comprehend paragraph 4, the second descriptive paragraph about Dinosaur Cove. One reason this is tricky is that the text structure in these paragraphs is descriptive, but the sentence selected to answer the question is a comparison. WHAT!? This is why you'll see students selecting answer C - we've been learning about different climates, just not then and now. Additionally, if students don't understand the climate in Alaska and how the author is using it to further describe the cold climate, this question will feel tricky. To answer question 35, students must understand that Dinosaur Cove is a place (explained in previous paragraphs). It is possible that students will understand the word plunged in other contexts - a plunger, plunging underwater, etc. However in this instance, the correct answer "fell suddenly" is a stretch given the sentence it is in. Knowing what we know about the text and given these questions, here are some possible lessons:
Notice how the focus of these lessons is not "informational text" in a passage; rather, it focuses on helping students access the text in order to comprehend. What we must realize is that a student who masters “RI.4.2” on one passage might flop it on the next, because it depends on the text, in addition to whether the student knows how to summarize a text. If the text presents too many challenges in how it is crafted, the student will struggle to find the main idea and key details. When we teach how to navigate different demands in texts, we better equip students to handle new texts. Working on identifying the text structure, understanding sentences and how they are formed, how authors leave information out to make their text more interesting (different types of inferences), and developing students’ vocabulary, we set them up for success. And indirectly, we might see an impact on the tests that haven’t yet changed. Leadership Moves:
What does this mean for me?It is not too late to check in on teachers’ instructional plans. Are passages being used as text to support instruction? Or are passages the instruction? Encourage your colleagues to examine the texts used and consider what challenges (demands) they present. Read them with the Blueprint in hand and consider how you might respond accordingly. Revolution ResourcesCheck out previous newsletters for related reading:
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